Ambient Sound

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By Daniella Lopez

Two Sets of Lovers


This poem describes the passion between two lovers. In the first portion of the poem, the two lovers are people who experience passion and ecstasy through the help of nature. In the second portion, the two lovers are Earth and Rain. Together, Earth and Rain demonstrate their love through a storm of thunder and lightning.

The ambience, or ambient sound, is the Nature’s Song that is playing for both sets of lovers. The sounds encircle them and provide them a beat and a rhythm for their love.

Lover's Ecstasy


Encircle me in your arms

Protective embrace

Wash over me


Your skin dominating mine

Sweat mingled together

We become one


Rain falls against the window pane

Nature sings her song

Giving our bodies a beat to dance with


Passion fuels our touch

Nature provides her song

Pleasure becomes ecstasy

Nature's Song


The rain falls

Soaked up by the earth

Together they too become one


Thunder echoes the Earth’s delight

To her lover rain

The rain falls harder in reply


Lightning crashes

Sparking passion and fire

Within the Earth’s bosom


Their climax is reached

With a plethora of thunder and lightning

Their thunderstorm is their ecstasy

Comments

Vinaya Ghimire profile image

Vinaya Ghimire Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Lover's Ecstasy is titillating while Nature's Song is very sonorous.

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chrisam01 Level 4 Commenter 6 months ago

Voted beautiful. I especially like Nature's Song. It's grey and gloomy here and it captures that feeling nicely!

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Daniella Lopez Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you both for your comments! :)

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DrJez Level 1 Commenter 6 months ago

Nature is a poem unto herself. Thanks for posting!

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Cresentmoon2007 6 months ago

Truly wonderful poetry Daniella. I really loved it. Beautiful in its up most. Voted up.

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Daniella Lopez Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you both for your lovely comments! :)

gmwilliams Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

Fantastic poem!

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Daniella Lopez Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you!

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Deborah Brooks 6 months ago

Awesome... love your poem... I voted up and beautiful..

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AudreyHowitt Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago

Hi Daniella--Loved Nature's Song especially! Well done!!!

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Daniella Lopez Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks Audrey!

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rebeccamealey Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago

Breathtaking. What a great poem. Real talent, I say. Voted up and awesome!

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Daniella Lopez Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks Rebecca! and thanks for the vote!

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